Soft spring winds
over the city move the curtains
soft pink nipples erect.
Dave Barber
Naughty Haiku
November 6, 2008
Spring Haiku 1
Posted by dbarber59 under Nearly Haiku, Poetry | Tags: girl, Haiku, naked, naked girl, naked women, naughty, poem, Poetry, sex, spring, women |[2] Comments
November 6, 2008 at 10:24 pm
I got a kick out of your other “naughty” haiku pieces, but this one’s my favorite. It’s so simply stated but absolutely visceral. I think you’ve inspired me to try my own.
November 6, 2008 at 10:29 pm
Super! I’m glad. I hope it’s not too much. But I had a great time writing these. They are fun. I guess I consider them naughty because of what I said. If you try one, why not post it here?
Dave